Wednesday 18 June 2014

The big storm!

Room 4 were all a bit tired after the big storm that came. But we all had a lot to say about what we saw and heard. Here are some amazing stories from the wonderful writers in Room 4, enjoy!



The storm made all the trees fall down. Jeremiah


The wind whistled and made the trees fall down. I saw the tree on the grass. When I went to school I saw a tree had fallen down on the road and it broke a fence. Melissa


The loud noises kept me from sleeping. When the big rain storm started to rain I couldn't sleep so I watched tv. Then I cried cause all my family were asleep and I was scared. I was scared because the big rain storm was really really loud. Fe'ao


I went to school and the big tree fell down. Soni

I was asleep and I heard the storm. I was scared. Adalyn

The storm went boom! I was scared when the tree fell down. Toa

The tree fell down at school. My sister couldn't come and play with me. Michael

When I went to sleep I heard a loud storm. When I went to sleep in the night. The loud noise woke me upI was a little bit scared. When I came to school the tree fell down and I couldn't get to the classroom. Deevah

6 comments:

  1. The storm had lightning and I was scared as well when I was sleeping.From Kara

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  2. Did you like the storm? I like the storm because it makes me go to sleep. By Avinash

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  3. Well done room 4 that was good and great work. From roman

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  4. At night the stom woke me up and i Like your writing

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  5. I remember the storm too. That was a big storm.

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  6. wow that is amazing
    from williams

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